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Kiyoko, my OC I made for Bleach ^.^
Kon calls her Kiy ^.^ :heart:
Kon + Kiyoko=:heart:
I plan to write a short story about her (eventually) :XD: ^^;
Her name means "pure child"
Which fits her perfectly! ^.^ (will explain later)

Name: Kiyoko
Hair: Blue
Eyes: Brown
Height: 5'4 (she's short :XD:)
Level: Captain (or above)
Zanbato Name: Mujitsu (pending)
Weight: *smacked* [SENSORED] :XD:
:heart:'s :iconkonplz: -> :iconhmfarmforever:

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Well, I have no Premium Membership to make a real Critique, so I hope this regular Comment will suffice.
This is most likely one of your best drawings yet in my opinion. The background/setting has turned out incredibly well; the lighting was done very well, and the shadow is realistic looking, though, the light coming in through the door he seems to be entering makes it a bit odd because of the windows light as well.
The girl’s positioning good, and I have nothing to say other then how wonderful she looks! :)
The legs might be the only thing that can be improved there.
Very good work Becky!

P.S I'm guessing this story is KonxOC
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It's fine ^.^

Thx ^.^
That's something I should have said in the artist's thing :P
The window only shows out. No one can see inside the window, and the window doesn't let light in. She's in a prison of sorts, they force her to watch others happiness that she never can nor could share. Once I finish the contest results, I'll add her short story to my "to write" list. I've been working on it in what little spare time I have... ^^; I did get a chapter of Ceci's story handwritten, and the beginning of a chapter for "The New Girl".

Thx ^.^
Yeah, I can't draw bare legs to save my life :XD: I hated how the legs turned out and tried to hide them with black.
Yes :heart:
And it's such a sweet story ^.^ (in my mind I have it written :XD:)

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Ah, ok that makes more sense about the window. But I did get the feeling she was in a prison.

Busy, busy eh? Vacation for me until Tuesday and I enjoy it )

Someone likes Kon..
Which, from one empisode from a year ago, I STILL remember him
saying something about Orihime when he wanted to hug her..
I haven't watched the show for sometime though XD
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Yeah the window is one of the many confusions :XD:
Sad thing is, she didn't do anything to get in there :(

Have fun! ^.^
Tomorrow's Thanksgiving for you guys right? Happy Turkeyday then! :XD: :iconturkeyplz:

:XD: *cough cough* Kiyoko *cough*
He's in love with Orihime :XD: I remember that, that made me laugh my head off (a near :rofl:) :XD:
I get to watch season 3 next weekend ^.^

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Poor girl..

We had dinner here tonight, so tommorow we drive home. Too bad we we couldn't go now, but its fine, if we had left we coulda seen my relatives..well we sorta need to be here

Kon wanted to 'loose himself in the pillows of ----' blocked for Kon being a pervert
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:nod: Yeah

I'm glad u got to see your family at least :(

:XD: :rofl: :lmao: (kon... kon... kon :XD:)

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I think they'd be to tired to drive home anywyas, six hours is a long time to drive :XD:

Kon, Kon, if he really did have a body (in this fic I bet he has/or/gets a body) he'd be going for women alot, then he'd end up getting hit even more
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For sure :XD:

(he does :XD:) Don't worry, Kiyoko whips him into shape :XD: :rofl:

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